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I am writing a paper on gay Rights tell me what you think; Please tell me if this paragraph is too long?

or just anything that you feel it needs or if I should change anything
There is an increasing number of children in today`s foster care system that are bounced around from foster home to foster home; There is also an increasing number of children in need of parenting in orphanages that would greatly benefit from loving guidance from anyone who is willing to take the time & provide loving care that most of these children are lacking. Being that homo-sexuals are human beings as well, they too share aspirations of 1 day becoming married & raising a family; just as those that identify themselves as heterosexuals. Among today`s land of the free it has become increasingly difficult for a homosexual to raise a child & even more so for a homosexual couple to raise a child as married couple; Recently a 47 year old man living in the state of Florida, where a state law exist that prohibits a homosexual from adopting child, has been serving as foster parent to 2 children & after growing increasingly found of the children had decided that he would like to adopt them. However the state law had prohibited him from doing so; He sued & trial court judge agreed, ruling ‘there was no evidence that gays & lesbians were less fit to parent than their straight peers` (no name? 8). Although the homosexual male in the case stated previously did win the court case based on fact that the judge agreed with him it still stands that there is a law in state of Florida that would otherwise prevent any willing human being from adopting child in much need of loving home; It seems that in the process of being spiteful towards those that identify themselves as homosexual the real victim in site are the children that don’t view love as color, gender, or sexual preference but(!) as gift. You can totally not like or agree but(!) explain why!

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