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Gay Teen Novel Idea, Opinons?

Okay the book tital is `Secretes of Transfer Student` & It`s about this kid named Jeremy, he use to live in California & in 7th Grade got caught making out with a male 8th grader wearing a white mask

only covering his eyes & really getting into it seeing as his hand his up his shirt, he is ridicouled & thrown out of the closet, the harrasment is so bad that he had to move to New York, he is now in 9th Grade & it is all past him, no1 hates him & he has friends & It`s all good, he doesn`t feel the need to come out to anybody, until 1 night he goes to a halloween party, he is sitting in a room because the party is getting a little loud & he needed a break, he notices some1

comming into room, he is like `hey` just casually not knowing person, until this new person pushes him to the bed & whispers `I know you secrete transfer student` Jeremy of course respondes by dening it until mystery student puts on white mask that covers his eyes, realizing It`s the same 8th grader from 2years ago. Jeremy is forced to start making out being pinned to the bed until they hear people comming upstairs, Tanen(mystery student) says `I;ll keep your secrete if you keep mine`. Jeremy thinks nothing of it because he already knew Tanen from before, until he starts

getting love notes in his locker at school, this progresses for a few weeks until Tanen is waiting for Jeremy in his room after school, pinning him to the bed again, Tanen confesses that from the day in 8th grade, he has been in love with Jeremy; Jeremy`s mother comes up the stairs so Tanen lets Jeremy go & says `This isn`t just a fling, I really do love you` winks, then leaves in mystery. Jeremy is very confused by whole situation because he had really forgot about it, then he remebers what happened that day in the first place. He was raised in Catholic house, being raised that liking girls was NECCESSARY & his parents were afraid to even mention the word gay fearing he would want it, so he went to the party & Tanen told Jeremy that he himself was gay, Jeremy having no idea what it was ask `What is that` & Tanen replied `I will show you` Jeremy remebers that he could have pushed Tanen off but(!) he didnt, because he like it too, realizing he himself was gay or bisexual.

Jeremy starts to like idea of Tanen being his love more & more to the point where when everyone leaves locker room he pushes tanen to the floor while he is in nothing but(!) tee shirt & boxers & this time instigates the making out, Which is all seen by Tanen`s best friend & step brother, Alex; Tanen pushes Jeremy off he calling him fag. few months go by in which Jeremy is in utter heart break but(!) he convinces himself he will be fine, while Tanen still in love with Jeremy wants to hold him extremely but(!) thanks to whole insident is being riducled again by the whole school. Prom arrives & Tanen is voted King while as a cruel joke Jeremy is voted Queen, almost in tears Tanen forcs a dead silence apon the school by kissing Jeremy right there, the book ends with Tanen saying `got a problem, take it up with me`

There it is, srry for the length lol, TY

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shvd28
Not bad at all

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gaymentop
Nice premise. I`d check spelling, too; There`s big difference between `secret` & `secrete` (Freudian slip?); ;o)

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gopbol
It`s sweet, I like ending, but(!) to much throwing. You should add an extra like a girl that has crush on 1 of them or something

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gopbol
I agree with Julia. I like the whole idea of the story; something that I would read. really interesting & I was engaged. I think that you should add something like, after Jeremy gets his heart broken, he tries to go out with girls, it doesn`t work out, etc. Just an idea;

Also I kind of don`t like the title. it`s slightly overused

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gopbol
very interesting

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jimmygay
I love it! It`s so sweet, though you might want to spell check it. How heard is it to spell `everyone`?

Also, fix your paragraphs, I don`t like how you run the sentences at the end of 1 paragraph to the beginning of the next. Whenever proposing an idea for a story, NEVER use chat speak, it just makes you look immature

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